John Sambrook's comments

Here are the comments I got from John Sambrook about yesterdays tree.  I've put my initial comments in-line, but this would be an excellent time to get more input especially about 280

 

> Email Address: john_sambrook@yahoo.com
> URL: http://www.common-sense.com
> I'd like to offer some scrutiny, if that's of interest.  It would help if you could number all entities on the tree, instead of just the UDEs. 

[done by Jim]
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> 1. Cause insufficiency from 10 to [280] "Sometimes project just take too long and are cancelled."
> 2. I guess I have a clarity reservation on "Sometimes projects just take too long and are cancelled as well."  Maybe break it up into "Sometimes projects take too long" leading to the effect that "Sometimes projects are cancelled."

 

 

Yes. I agree.  On reflection 10 obviously doesn't cause 280. 

 

Howabout: IF 10 AND [a differently worded 280] THEN 300.

 

 

 

Any one have any better suggestions for the wording of 280? 

 

 
> 3. Clarity on "Projects are sometimes cancelled late in the project due to insurmountable problems."  In this effect, I'd suggest not saying what this is "due to."  The CRT is supposed to be telling us what causes this.  Having this restated as text in the effect itself is redundant.

Jim did this already!

 
> OK, my build just finished, so I have to get back to work.  I'll offer more scrutiny in the future, if it's helpful.
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> John
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